10 Copy editing Errors

 Women’s Basketball: Turnovers, foul trouble end Lady Raiders’ season in the opening round of WNIT

1. A lot of the fouls were near the end of the game, but losing a player like Johnson late is a big blow to the team.

Correction: Majority of the fouls were near the end of the game, but losing a player of Johnson’s caliber late was a blow to the team. 

2. The Lady Raiders struggled to keep Ball State away from the charity and in the end, it was simply too much for them to handle.

Correction: The Lady Raiders struggled to keep Ball state away from the free-throw line and in the end, it became to hard to overcome. 

3. The Lady Raiders committed 18 turnovers on Thursday night, a number that has simply become too common for the squad.

Correction: Delete “simply”

4. The final three quarters were particularly brutal, as they committed five miscues in each quarter. In the third, the Lady Raiders had a 3:05 span where they committed four turnovers alone.

Correction: uneasy to watch

5. It’s been a season-long issue for the Lady Raiders, and it came to roost one final time in their last game of the season.

Correction: It’s been a season-long issue for the Lady Raiders, which played factor again in the teams final game. 

A new me’: A freshman’s every thought as the semester begins

6. How did I get here? Wasn’t it just yesterday that I was a brace-faced, awkward 8th-grader bursting through the doors like I owned the place?

Correction: eight-grader

7. 2018 Oscars best dressed list

Star of Hollywood’s latest blockbuster, Black Panther, Chadwick Boseman takes the top spot on the men’s best dressed list.

Correction: “Black Panther”

Civil rights activist, Southwest Minnesota State University professor reflect on Martin Luther King Jr’s legacy at MTSU

8. McLemore stated that he was a student at the University of Massachusetts Amherst when he heard on the radio about King’s death in Memphis, Tennessee, and Kolnick was riding in a car as a nine year old with his mother in Los Angeles when he heard the announcement on the radio.

Correction: nine-year-old

Why you should go to the 3rd annual Nashville VegFest

9. Tickets for VegFest are $10 and are available through the event’s website. MTSU students can use promo code “mtsu” at checkout for a 50% discount. 

Correction: 50 percent 

 Hype to humble: How Chase Miller has managed to stay levelheaded during his Blue Raider tenure

10. When he’a not on the court, Miller is highly involved with several other organizations on campus. One of the main groups he is involved with is Kappa Sigma.

Correction: he’s

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